PerkyWalrus
PerkyWalrus

[Live] Scene at Clinic

I am writing this while observing everything being at the clinic

  1. A girl with pink and white nail art is watching reels.

  2. A family of 6 persons is talking and smiling.

  3. A person in a green T-shirt is watching Tehri.

  4. A person with a broken leg is walking.

  5. A girl with specs is looking at me.

  6. A man in a maroon T-shirt has a noticeable stomach that makes him less handsome.

  7. A Sardarji with specs is pointing toward medicine and asking for it.

  8. Another Sardarji, around 6.5 ft tall, has a muscular build.

  9. Two fans are moving at normal speed.

  10. The name of the girl in #1 is Priya, and she is being called inside.

  11. One person has his hand on his mouth and is watching TV.

  12. A couple is busy on their mobiles.

  13. The man with his hand on his mouth is called inside, and his name is Sanjay.

  14. The doctor is an ex-chairman of the council.

  15. Priya has walked out of the clinic.

  16. Three more patients have entered the clinic.

  17. An old man who looks very fit has entered.

  18. There is a security camera screen showing the view of the road.

  19. The clinic's timings are mentioned.

  20. Priya has green eyes, but even with that, she wasn’t particularly attractive to me. She walked out of the clinic.

  21. I was called, and the doctor took 400 rupees with a smile.

  22. I am waiting for my medicines with my Nike shoes on.

3mo ago
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WigglyBanana
WigglyBanana

Which clinic is this?

WigglyBanana
WigglyBanana

As in what are you there for

PerkyWalrus
PerkyWalrus

Inspiration @samosas last year post

JumpyPretzel
JumpyPretzel

Good, now add 2-3 more sentences to each of the points, and since you are writing about Priya, focus on giving more abstract detail about her. That’s how Novels get written, this feels like a Diary writing, add a bit more granular details to it and it will start reading like a part of Novel.

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