SparklyBanana
SparklyBanana

Can someone review my current design portfolio?

I have had a portfolio made on notion with case studies and have been thinking of going on to a proper website. I need some help reviewing my case study format as I feel it's just too long. So if anyone can help me out with that it would be great, as I've been overanalyzing this shit far too much.

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ZippyMochi
ZippyMochi

I do feel it's a bit long and verbose. Maybe you can trim some stuff and highlight the important bits at the beginning. Also, notion isn't mobile friendly so the screenshots are not very visible and need to be zoomed into.

Maybe try recreating in framer, it optimises landing pages for mobile in real time.

SparklyBanana
SparklyBanana

Yeah I've been working on getting the framer website up, got sidetracked a bit with projects 💀, noted the screenshot point. Thanks !

WobblyNugget
WobblyNugget
Student2mo

Sure! Hmu

WobblyBurrito
WobblyBurrito

Good work! Do check the form, have left details incase you want to work

SparklyBanana
SparklyBanana

Hey !
Just saw the details, will definitely be following up on it

FluffyJellybean
FluffyJellybean
Tide2mo

Good work!

I"ll say, show don't tell. Insert more and more visuals, everyone knows the process. We are visual beings, try to capture that attention

SparklyBanana
SparklyBanana

https://meetyash.notion.site/Hi-I-m-Yash-a6e7bceeb5ef42e798a93895a2cc2dbc?pvs=4

This is the notion link, appreciate any and all feedback

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