Anyone had any experiences like this with VCs in india?

The sentence should have started with a capital W and it should have end with a full stop.

Jo khud sheesho ke mahal me rehte hai, wo doosro pe kaanch nahi phenkte. 😅

This looks like "If you can't fight, correct the grammar".

why is this person assuming that the VC is talking about his language? he didn't say anything like that .

It might be about his idea or something he knows about him already.

Please name this guy man! Would love to know who this Idiot is

The issue wasn't that you're ESL, the issue is you didn't care enough to proofread your message.

It shows lack of attention to detail, which is a huge red flag for a startup founder.

It makes it seem like you were shotgunning these messages out to VCs randomly.