Poor reading comprehension

Bro, you are earning. Shouldn't you just be grateful that you are not born in war torn Afghanistan or disease ridden Africa. I mean life could be so much worse. In fact, the only difference between you and the office boy is the household you were born in. If that office boy was born in your home, he probably would be as successful as you. You already won the lottery. Why not just do your part and pay the income tax so that the tax money can be used to provide a better life to those who are unprivileged. I am not excusing the corruption in the system but just find the cribbing unbearable Just be greatful

Whenever I read foreign media outlets, India is the new Asian Tiger that will outpace most emerging economies in growth. But Indian media and Indian people act like India is the worst place to be. The dichotomy is extremely confusing. Why is it that foreign media coverage on our economy is more favourable than our own hopes and aspirations from this country? PS: I am really big on Indian Exceptionalism, the belief that India's economic development and trajectory are unique or exceptional compared to other nations, driven by our large and diverse population, thriving middle class, our entrepreneurial spirit, and the emphasis on technology and innovation. Source: https://www.bloomberg.com/news/features/2024-04-07/can-india-overtake-china-as-world-s-growth-engine-it-could-happen-by-2028

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City - Bangalore, both Software Engineers My salary - 48LPA Wife’s salary - 30LPA In hand salary both - 4L per month Yearly bonus - 8L Monthly expense - 1L Rent - 35k Car EMI - 16k Other expense - 50k Investments - Monthly SIP - 1L Stocks - 50k Remaining 1.5L saved in account for big investments and emergency Current assets and portfolio - MF and stock - 20L PF - 15L Land value - 1.3Cr Flat - 1.6Cr Term insurance - 3 Cr Health insurance - 10L